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Part 3: The entrance hallway

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Despite its ornate decorations and the sheer size of the institution’s entrance hallway, an important place of first impressions regarding The Society and its people, a feeling of claustrophobia never fails to cloud the air; perhaps it was the way the chandelier floated effortlessly above the members as they walked briskly and purposefully to their next destination, the way the large glass windows at each end seemed to open up to the horizons of the vast fields of sienna wastelands, or the way the unsettling eyes of The Society’s past presidents (whose portraits hung between the marble pillars) stares into the empty chasm between the two walls. Nevertheless, one never spends too much time in the entrance hallway.

From here, one had three choices of where to go – four if he includes the choice of walking out the front door back to where he came from. The first branching of the hallway on the left leads to the grand houses of the different classes, where the infamous mechanical induction room may be found, as well as the society member’s lodgings, cafeteria, classrooms and training grounds; the second and third branches leads further underground to areas of higher restricted access, reserved only for the class supervisors and directors.

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2 comments:

Hinagikun said...

I have a feeling this part is too short, but I also feel as if too much was established to add more information without overstuffing the part... I don't know, what do you guys think?

Sandy said...

I think it's kinda short, too... but as I'm not really sure where you want to go with this, I don't know what you could add.

I suppose, if you wanted, you could either add some sort of Secret Section of the building nobody knows about... or you could move the part of the fourth choice at the end.

Also, it might be fun to know where this information is coming from. A tour, or a pamphlet, or a video reel.

But anyway, this is your part of the collab to do whatever you want. So, whatever you see fit of course!

I like the imagery and such, though. And surprised that you took this route in the story! I like it!

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